Thursday, May 31, 2018

My writing

This week for writing we have had a brake from doing explaining writing, and instead we were shown a picture of this bird to write about it was a free choice of what kind of writing we wanted to do. I just did a poem on how the bird was trapped in the plastic bag. please enjoy.

Trapped and lonely, its wings restricted from freely soaring through the air. Hungry and alone as it gets asphyxiated from the carelessness of human beings and there rubbish. As the chaotic bird watches as his free, fulfilling life becomes trapped and miserable. Struggling and weak as it,s fraile legs are restrained from walking,losing balance every try. Longing for the feeling of being free rather than being trapped and alone. The littering and pollution needs to stop because the animals and the environment are paying for what humans are doing.
SAVE THE PLANET!!!

2 comments:

  1. That is very sad😭 but very good work😃

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  2. Kia Ora Leilani,
    I really like your poem about the bird that got trapped in the plastic bag. It is so true how the animals in the world are paying for humanity’s thoughtless carelessness. Humans DO need to notice what they are doing to the environment, otherwise it will just get worse and worse.

    Thanks for posting, Astin

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