This post is my writing this is called a pick a path story and my learning intention for this is to write a narrative story with a beginning middle and end. This story also gives you a choice to pick a path to witch way comes next.. What I found hard while writing this story is that I struggled to find ideas and I spent really long trying to find ideas. I enjoyed writing this story and I will be presenting it to one of the junior classes at Kawakawa Primary school.
This is a great story! It surprises me that you struggled to find ideas when you finished so quickly. You have a detailed description of your DLO, maybe next time you can check your sentences make sense :)
ReplyDeleteHey Leilani its your favourite cousin Adelia! I really love your pick a path story because of the setting and how you presented it. I think that you should add more options because there arent that much in your story but besides that is it really cool and I wish I could have worked with you! Please visit my blog!
ReplyDeleteHI Leilani Its satyn your cousin i am 11 yrs old, i like how you made the slide it is very interesting and i have no tips for you because it is just so spontaneous
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feel free to check out my blog her it is just search for it and hopefully it comes up :)\
http://kpssatync.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi leilani This was a great interesting fun story to read i really really wish to see more stories like this But AMAZING WORK!!
ReplyDeleteHi Narni it's your friend Te Aroha :) I really like your pick a path story! It's very creative and I really like it! Check out my pick a path story about a diver and a taniwha on my blog http://kpstearohak.blogspot.co.nz/ Nice job Leilani very great work!
ReplyDeletekia ora leilani this was a great interesting story it was fun reading the lost alien i like this amazing work.
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